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Xiulan nervously gulped while slowly wears the mask. She can't believe that she'll be witnessing a brutal interrogation.

I told her "of course your cuter, by the way we just have to stay here until the sun rise right".

Easing her up, Damien led her to a truck and had her sit down. He watched her closely, obviously worried.

As I arrived at the house that I lived at with mr Leon and Mrs Annabelle I entered with a grin on my face.

So much to do, so much to see

"Jester brings me a potion of kindness."

The story is great but it is difficult to read because of the grammar errors which makes it hard to actually enjoy the story.              

I really like it a lot.i recommend reading it 👍🏻

First let me start of by saying the reasons I like this novel.The main selling point is the unusual ability of MC to control insects and his merciles persona. Besides that, I personally think the interaction with the spider girl, Victoria is very cute.I always appreciate a good romance inside a novel—not too dramatic, nor too light—along with strong action sequences. If these two factors remain consistent throughout the novel, I might give it a full read until it's finished.I don't think a brilliant writing quality is necessary to attract someone like me, as long as it's not unbearable grammer or too AI generated, its fine.I don't know in which direction the story is shaping—this early in the novel, so I can't really comment about that. Though, I can feel you are trying to build something solid with the flow it's going.Honestly, and I mean I'll be very frank; I'm in it for the spider girl and well made characters, each having a distinct personality. As for the aspects you can improve on:when shifting from a emotion invoking scene to a different one—completely unrelated to it, try not to include too much details or added information in the following scene. I'm saying this because people, when already stirred with emotions beforehand, tend to skim past the long paragraphs filled with information, because they are forced to surrender the emotional content they felt earlier.Now onto the world building. I feel like you can improve on it; you know... adding a bit more depth and information about the world, or perhaps highlighting the surrounding atmosphere and vibes.Consistent upload schedule is always a given. There is no compromise in this, if you want to have a successful novel in this app, especially at the start.And yea, that's about it.. nothing more I can critique on. Keep up the good workP.S: all of these are simply my personal opinions, and I never claim to be an expert.also P.S: I'm a HUGE sucker for good fluffy romance, and action scene.

this book has actually peeked my interest. I feel the author has something unique as i like the way he writes i just need more ch

This has been an interesting read so far. Though, having to wait a day to read more chapters is quite tiring.

Potencial to be one of my favorite novels indeed, looks really interesting, usually I dont expect a lot from new novels but this acctually surprised me for the positive.Right now one of few that I discovered scrolling random that I saved for keeping reading itIf you like Soul games you should give it a try, the MC is not dumb thank god, and seems pretty direct, a little bit suicidal at first but he does better later.