I just got to first 5 chapter but story seems to be forced.1. First time going with a date with a roommate's sister where roommate asked him to go to date. But, their father gets him kidnapped by Mafia just because he don't like his daughter going on a date with anyone and want to test MC.2.Asking the boss of said Mafia to adopt him when he just wounded some of the Mafia members and Mafia boss agrees to it.
Your style is different from the novels I read since it doesn't have a lot of prose. The writing style you have is not bad and is actually it is easy to understand. It is good and easy to read, and the flow of the story is good also. I probably got used to reading old fashioned novels or format but it does not matter. There is a lot of reference too that I can relate, especially in the first few chapters. It really did crack a smile on my face and is really entertaining. My verdict for the story is 4.6/5.0. I noticed some minor mistakes in capitalization and spelling but proofreading and some edits can fix them. It's a good story in overall and please do not give up writing. I find it a good read and entertaining at the same time.Thank you for reading this review!The TradeMaker
👍 Good book , I have read up to the newest chapter which was chapter 60 at the time of me posting this review . I have been left satisfied by the ending of volume 1 and still eager for volume 2 , It has been a good experience reading this book so that’s about it for my review .
Because of Amy's ridiculous and adorkable behavior, Sara was able to smile- and Mary scolding her like a mother with real concern hidden in those odd eyes of hers, made Sara feel warmth in her fake heart.
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