Dark Ceasar

Hello, author here. Thank you for having given my second novel a chance. I plan to update two chapters every day. Moreover, I always read the comments, so I will fix every error that you point out in less than a day.Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story.

Aye! The premise is interesting hehe! :DI enjoyed reading a story about a sword that was trying to reach a higher level hehe!Writing-wise, it's nice, grammar and punctuation are great :DI also loved the world-building hehe! It was pretty detailed, and I could see that the author had put a lot of thought into itttGreat job, author! <3

Early-ish review but going great so far. Grammar and spelling are perfect, and the story is engaging. Protagonist is on the weak to strong/neet to chad path and can't wait to see his growth, as well as his harem... 😏

Well, so far the first chapter is not holding my attention too much, but I'll wait about ten more chapters to make sure I'll continue reading it or not. Still I have high expectations for this work. I am a fan of most of the author's work though.

I am slightly biased but I seriously want to read more of this novel.So, we have this main character(son) who gets into unknown troubles for whatever reason and our real main character(Father) gets a powerful who then saves his son.The plot sounds pretty basic and cliche but how the story is presented should be more important.The story so far is pretty good for me, at least I didn't feel bored yet...it may also be because of me not mas turbating for some time.you know, mas turbation makes us and our brain a bit lazy and not mas turbating keeps us active throughout the day.Anyway, the story is good obviously not some masterpiece level novel but still enjoyable for people that wants to read an MC(Father) that will overpower those powerful ancestors that makes their appearance after an MC(Son) provokes their whole family.

Honeslty I like the concept but the mc's senior brother who is the sect leader flat out ruins the novel for me. Such an incredibly forced character. To say he's bad at pill refining is an understatement but the author has created him as a character who childishly and stubbornly refuses to accept that fact, and instead of actual effort/development, it becomes a meme that trashes the novel. The sheer obliviousness to his own failure makes it an absolute joke.

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