Cinta Perdana Menteri

"I'm Kisuke Urahara. The creator of this dimension and the man whose come up with a method to end you."

<Under the effect of the ability Heart of Nature bequeathed the condition [Plant System, Plant Nucleus] was changed to:

Oh please, Naruto wasn't an idiot. Of course, he knew he couldn't let the man have the scroll. However, at the same time, Naruto had a rather hard peeve with being insulted. even if it wasn't his body. He loathed it. He…absolutely…loathed…IT! "Sorry Iruka-sensei, but that's not an option," Naruto said as he stood to his feet. He quickly dusted himself off from the dirt before he sidestepped Iruka. Iruka watched Naruto in surprise and shock.

sky: when I'm pissed off cold is how I calm down, so not really rn

"We shall see when he wakes up." An old man replied

After his supposed shift was done, the teen just kept on following him wherever he went. He tried going to the smoking room and smoke some cigarettes, but he found the teen already sitting there attentively. He then went to the snack bar but was surprised to find him kneeling with a cheap gum on his palm presented as an offering. He tried sneaking to the employee's lounge but immediately noped out when he saw the familiar silhouette before the door. At this point, he has given up on ditching the guy. So instead of getting away from him, he decided to let the bloke follow him around.

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

Of course I'll do my very best to get away."

So I read it, here's my two cents about this book, at first I like how the story was portrayed by first person but it suddenly change to third person that actually mad me lose interest  it changes abruptly. I do not relate to the main character so I was not hook, I think, just my suggestion  you should consider changing point to point perspective with considerations. The writing quality it good and it was mysterious but some may not find it catching when the mystery is not that something where when  you read it you'll be full of questions, In terms of plot and world building,  I think it's good to make it more interesting. Remember, that's just my opinion  don't take it to the heart. It's better than average just need some work, keep up the good work

interesting Mc so far. nice to see a female hero in an apocalypse world

After reading all these chapters all I can say is that the author is new if he tackles it well then it could turn out to be an interesting story.

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?