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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me

An amazing Christian romance novel with the unveiling of the reality of the spiritual and supernatural facet of life.I give a wonderful thumbs up to the author.👍 You have a great writing style.Simple language that is harnessed to show beauty.I love the characters. Particularly, Sarah. Aaron had such a dark past. Thankfully, there is hope for all who are in darkness and that hope is Jesus Christ.I highly recommend Bittersweet to everyone.

This is an amazing IET story. Particularly just an IET fan and how his unique way of expressing the Dao makes us immersed in history, to the point where we want to find our own Dao! This story brings a righteous MC, who follows his heart in all things, regardless of circumstances. The created world is easy enough to be understood, and the way karma is used, avoids those annoying plots with the strong bullying the weak. Anyway, another amazing story of IET, just READ!!!

First, this is the most underrated story on webnovel. Second, its not premium. Third, its just amazing. Ill give a TLDR because this will get long.TLDR: Read it. While the pace can be slow in some areas, and there really doesnt seem to be a real threat to the mc at the current time, every chapter is still interesting and fun to read. It keeps you reading, has great quality, and isnt nearly as cliche as most novels.Now for the real review (contains spoilers):Writing Quality - if I could give 4.5 I would, but i couldnt figure out how. it deserves a five over a four though. Great grammar, good structure, varied sentence length, no gender mistakes, nothing. I would give a 4.5 because every now and then a word is spelled wrong or is replaced with a wors that is spelled similarly but has a different meaning. This happens to perhaps one word every 2-3 chapters. The grammar is phenomonal. Update stability - It updates at around the same time day in and day out. I dont mind daily releases because the quality stays consistent and the chapters arent too short.Story Development - Four stars, would have gave 3.5 if I could have. As much as im addicted to the story, its plot is just not something i find...unique? Fresh? Interesting? While the book is not very cliche, the plot is not what I would call revolutionary. Its the typical worlds are merging save the earth story of many video game web novels. Of course, it is done far better than 99 percent of any other story on this site. Also, i never feel a sense of urgency for the mc. Yes, the worlds will merge, yes, humanity is in danger, but the mc will be fine. He grows so quickly that it feels like all problems will just be frozen in ice by his power. I feel nothing for the side characters impending doom because none of the side characters are prevalent enough to make me care. overall the plot just kinda seems like “man goes to VR, Man is OP, man travels around getting more OP, but wait, the big bad is in the background doing....something? Who cares! Fancy armour awaits! All that said, its a general and slightly boring overall plot that is fed to us in a very engaging and interesting way. the plot is not anything great, but its delivery is phenomonal.Character Design - Also a bit flat. The mc is great! He has morals, he has character, he has desires. Everyone else.....Ive read every chapter as it has come out and i can remeber three actual names beyond the generic “mom.” We have Neith, awesome pet spider whose personality i still dont really know. Thalia, stuck out because she was a princess and was a unique character. And King Slayer, only because he is the basically the ***ond in command. Everyone else is just kinda off to the side in “remember if I see them, but dont care about them at all.” While this is due to the mc being alone with Neith most of the time, it not only detracts from the world but also from the plot, as stated earlier. Of course, I love alone time with Adam, its why I read the book, but if im being objective, the lack of character interaction and personality beyond Adam is hurting the story overall.World Development - This is well done. We have gods and stuff in the background we know a bit about, the world has history, it has factions, power struggles, and every nation is unique in its own way. they have thwir own cultures, and the world is well explored through Adams travels. overall, i would say world development is a strong point of the novel.Closing remarks - probably the best book on webnovel. Room for improvement in characters and a bit in plot development (they are linked in this case), but overall, a great story if your looking for something hou wont have to decipher, gives you great fights, and really draws you into the world.

nice Novel Author the story is really refreshinggood job hope to read more of themSimping for both of them ❤️❤️❤️

I am a huge fan.+ Up and downs but allways interesting+the people are real charakters not dump with 2d personalities+MC is intelligent but not in everything+magic depth- not enough chapters (hope that changes)

Amazing character building with accurate sense of writing. Every situation depicted, transforms into a scene very easily. Quite realistic when it comes to mental and emotional dilema that the character faces. Loving it. Need more.❤️

<p>Try as his best, the warning was still too late!</p>