The story itself is very good (SRSLY, READ IT NOW. NOW), but I have a few bones to pick with the physics.Now, I know the powers are srsly great and unpredictable, but the thing is, I like to think. And one day, I thought about Matcha's power(not a spoiler, this is literally 2-3 chapters in), which is stopping time. When he does so, he can punch other cats. And I read, speechless, that they could survive! Now, let me explain.You know how to calculate speed, right? It's <distance travelled in n seconds>/n. And you see, when you stop time and travel during that time, the distance is some amount of meters while time is 0. Let's not even think about the fact that it breaks one of the fundamentals in math of not dividing by zero, I'm talking about speed. Let's assume, that n/0 = infinity. Cuz in this scenario it's basically infinite. Now let's see... momentum = mass * speed, so it's infinite too. So, even if you move a fucking spec of dust 1 micrometer, it's momentum will be infinite. That means, it will be able to move without any constraints, because when something collides with the other things, momentum is shared. So the momentum of the object that spec of dust collides with becomes infinite too. The mass is already defined, so now we just have an object moving at infinite speed. Let's not talk about what it would do to the object(other cat in this scenario), let's talk MORE PHYSICS. The speed limit is light speed, and light speed < infinite speed, so we have MORE LAWS OF PHYSICS BROKEN. I like this novel, but the very first cat out MC obtains basically can insta-kill everyone, breaks several laws of physics and EVEN MATH whenever he uses his power. Like, WHAT THE FUCK?!
So far, this is a story about someone imprisoned for a crime that I honestly think is weird(but awesome!) The novel has done good so far in highlighting the Main characters emotions feelings, and I've seen more character growth in these few chapters than I have seen in hundreds of chapters for other novels. Read it, I assure you, it won't be dissapointing.
So lengthy to read and absolutely fcuking boring. The story premise is good, but the added extra details are very lengthy that make you feel like reading same business news from different magazines one after another without gap.
Alright what to say what to say...Its great so far. The world is clearly described without going overboard and letting readers figure things out on their own. The mc is fun and can be relatable at times which is always a plus, the writing quality itself is great itself with the exception of a typo or two every now and then.All in all this looks promising and its definitely worth a read, at least from what I've seen.
Author can you continue with the novel ? I really think that it really is a good concept that you have here and a lot of us would like to continue reading this story ..... 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
i am not really sure about teh stability of updates, and i really don't care when the story is this good just make sure the you don't drop it it is great... you can go on hitas and pick it up later but just don't drop it k
41 chapters in and so far I really like the story. Especially the diary part which was quite good. The Mc is someone I really like and I hope I see some great moments of him
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