Man this world building is total mesh something he shows China superiority in earth ,that understable as novel is Chinese,but then he goes some random continent as well as as Thier is kingdom and nation ,the hell decide first whether it China or some random wuxia continent he mixed world with wuxia type as he is Chinese he try to show Chinese superiority but in next paragraph he goes back to some random nation I got totally confused
HI LOVELY AUTHORRR! Firstly, I can't help but mention it's easier on the readers eyes if the paragraphs are smaller. Secondly, the different dialects of the characters have been maintained wonderfully oof! Lasty, it was never a cup of my tea, (this genre) however i find myself intrigued to stay on track with this amazingly scripted piece. The time i have in my hands doesnt do justice as i reallly wanna read more hehe. WELL DONE
something you should know before reading this novel:1. Why is there even a romance tag? 2. Mc is weak... Yes you heard it right weak, no jokes here3. Why he behaves so timid? Ewww I hate this kind of mc 4. Is that even a system? From my point of view system is a type of cheat that makes you op in a very short amount of time, he only reached the 9th level of the first realm in over 10 years. Can you even call it a cheat?5. No motivation6. Why is it seems like he doesn't have any intelligence? 7. Boring concept (always the same)8. Irritating beta behaviour of mc 9. No world-building10. Ahh, as usual, not even trying to explain the characters' looks... Sword-like eyes? 😂, fairy? Are you serious!!! Using fairy for every beauty!! Seriously?? It's cringe
This was just dumb, I feel like the author doesn’t even attempt to base things off reality or science or anything that makes sense! He just writes whatever he wants that doesn’t even work. It feels like my intellect dropped from the few chapters I read ugh...
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There's not much for me to, just some concern about the MC's system. When I think about it, there's no need for the MC to work hard, he can just invest and invest then he'll get 10x rebate. That's why I'm hoping for the author to give a proper limitation its benefits. Moreover, in perspective, not all people are that easygoing. That they would help someone just by knowing their name or something, but I might be wrong. Maybe there's some hidden agenda or whatnot. Anyway, it's a good read.
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