Thanks to the author for explaining that it was indeed intentional to time skip the section I asked about. Only gripe I have is how abrupt and random the time skip was, especially when it spoiled a LOT of story. For those that want to know when this big skip happens, it's the chapter after [Trauma].SPOILER NEXT:The big leap from the MC just surviving an attack, only to suddenly jump to when he's now suddenly in a life or death duel with no clue as to who any of the newly introduced characters are is disorienting. I thought it was intended at first but the amount of information that was lacking was off putting and frustrating to read through to the point where I genuinely thought there were chapters missing. It wasn't like the time skip thing that happened at the start where the MC clicked "NO" and then we got the background up until that foreshadowing point, it was just a straight up skip of what seemed to be 1-2 mini arcs worth of content to read.CONCLUSION:I enjoy this story, but the fact that I have to trudge through a completely new arc and characters I know nothing about and have to remember what their relationships and characteristics are have put me in a dilemma as it started becoming less enjoyable for me. I may try and read again later cause I don't want to make reading what is clearly a well thought out and developed story a chore. I recommend reading in small intervals, or stop if you get confused and take a break.
Nice Story! Love the idea of cultivation but many things remained unexplained. Well, it has only seven chapters now, so I can not judge it. Waiting for more chapters
Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I have read so far:I do really like the concept for this story and the author writing style in this novel. The story was about a young man Marco who wanted to find peace with horrible households and the build up from him going out to the house is well done. While the writing style feels very smooth and the description in this story is quite vivid.Marco also as a character is quite fine for now, but I believe the author will give a further development about his character when he entered the new world and I also believe the author will give a consequence of his action to make the story much more exciting. As for the side character, they are so far fine for now and personalities are distinct too with another. However, I also hopefully do want to see Marco parent development too after their son left them.Overall that's all I have to say about this novel and this novel has a great potential. Thank you very much and keep up the good work
still reading keep up the good work. some of the writing quality needs work but it is good and thanks for the chapter's........................................................
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