This technique isn't really all in powering it basically used profound energy around me and infuses it with my body and soul to make it easer latter on to use and captivate along with making my body strong enough to not become sick and have better control, for the soul it basically makes it easier to focus and think.
Just gonna drop some info, okay. HSK has a discord server you can join, it's where I post art of the official Manga. You can discuss with me what the lore is or anything related like addressing how bad my grammar is 💀. I'm sorry in advance English is my 5th language.
It sounds interesting man! But at chapter 1 I got 2 points: Too much stuttering😂 and also mixing up the tenses, but that is not something necessarily bad. To me some just some of the sentences sound weird. Also it might be a bit confusing, but I guess that’ll solve itself when you continue the story.As a starting author myself, I must say that the story’s got potential man, so keep writing.
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