Aru Okugata ga Rikon Shite Jiyu o Mankitsu Suru Made no Hitorigoto

wonderful story

writing quality is good with good grammar and proper story writing. Good enough to keep readers retain the story.The story development is really good with how you wrote only the necessary details and kept readers engaged with the story. I like how the story is simple and you didn't info dump it. You are really an experienced and proper author.The character design needs some work. I mean how people hate him because he is just poor kid.And is Silvia a feminist. because readers assume things when you don't represent them. I know you want to make things suspensive but just bragging about beauty isn't how you should introduce characters.Other than that the story is very good. The updating stability is good.And world building is just good until now. As it completed in the future

At first I did not dare to read this novel because of the strange description. But I saw a high rating and started reading this novel. I have never regretted doing this. This is a great story with elements of R18. Many stories lack such scenes, but the author corrected this monstrous mistake. I think everyone will be pleased after reading this story.P.S. I do not recommend reading this story in the presence of other people and in tight clothes.

The translation quality really lets this magnificent story down (e.g. terms being left in pinyin frustrates me - as i don't know whether the translator is doing that because he is lazy or he is simply oblivious).I recommend the translator spending the time and putting in some effort to go back from the beginning and edit some of the terms used so the story can flow better and provide an overall better experience for the reader.

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"yes!" 'Lin Menger' spoke with a slightly red face.

"Err, Elias, Sir, why didn't the instructor tell us about his method? I could tell that this method of cultivation is more effective than the ones they gave us."