Overall, the book has an overwhelming sense of self. This isn’t a story that follows every other trope or timeline, but one that follows its own path. Not only that, the story is consistent and makes sense, the foreshadowing is used correctly, the characters have shown steady, fluid development, and the world is created well. 5/5 stars deserved. This could be published as a paperback eventually as a bestseller if wanted.
i feel like the name of this stroy does not match perfectly with the actual story. it's really slow paced (no problems there). But I walked in on this story hoping for a more "Ruler"/Guild master setting. a good story all in all but I'm missing the "subordination" part of this, he only controls two people really and some NPC's. **: MC is a absolute idiot.
So far, and 80 chapters are not that much, this novel is one of the best on webnovel.Decent to good grammar, a nice world building, good story telling, character progression, and a lot happening but not too much.Nice pace, too.A hidden gem I would say :)
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Can,t say much at this point in time. So far, the pace is alright. World Setting is slowly being introduced. Same with the characters.Hoping to see more chapters soon!
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