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So far ive Read 43 chapter its an good and has amazing potential but i think there are some thIngs that need to fixed:1. Mcs control over is emotions when he fights bc he kills without thinking and causes quite a lot if problems for his family trying to “protect” them, if he continues like this he’ll be the reason for their deaths.     A why to fix this in my opinion which i                 think is absolutely nessecary any way is a skill i call “absolute control” (absolute control over his mind,body,and arua) is goes with his title of an assassin and the author has mentioned he is not in control of his mind 50% and is suppressing an inner monster in which will get rid of these problem or at least help2. repeative fighting style for 2-3 chapter per fight i can pretty much sum it up for in 3 words... dodge,strike, and kill. for 400 years of fighting its pretty bland so i propose :      A skill i call “god of mastery” its use is simple he gets instant mastery towards any martal arts and cold weapons but the priority will be daggers,katana, ninjato, bows, and needles/posion,ect.And 3. which think would be a great skill “phantom/light manipulation” a skill in which is he intangible to physical to at a certain amout and can also conseal his arua and only those that are stronger then him can sense him/ his mana. he can also become one with a shadow or become invisible.This is my first a probably last review like this so hope it good. :)

Decent story, even if the main amount of character growth for the MC happened before the story takes place. While not as OP as alot of OP MC, it is still much unlimited money cheat codes with the ability to then p2w growth.Characters aren't 2d but just shy of 3d and fully fleshed out. Main downside is that every woman is "sexy". Not to mention that it seems improbable that in the first 100 chapters that every woman the MC interacts with is roughly described as being an 8+ out of 10. And when talking to these characters it is always "so in so said with her sexy mouth. So in so kicks with her sexy legs, so in so shakes her sexy body." We get it, they are attractive, but this story seems to feel that any womans main quality is how attractive they are, not that she just stabbed someone with a sword made of fire, or that she can even make a sword with fire. If you are looking for an pretty standard world that is decently fleshed out and a OP MC(cheat OP, not broken OP), with alchemy, read this.HOWEVER, if you are sick of bland MCs who are portrayed as the bestest because of their hard word. That looks very similar to greedisgood and pop all the pills, boring enemies, and a power system that describes things as rare that also fall in the MC lap, on top of horny teenager author writing style, avoid this like the plague.

Yami nodded and then went around and looked for a place to sleep at.

Karin nodded. "Yeah," she started to eat. "It's actually been a dream of mine since I was seven. I've always wanted to visit other countries."

"Well actually, if you clean all this up, I will buy you some ramen for dinner tonight." scratching his face, Iruka responded while looking in the other direction.

"Kau kira semudah itu meminta maaf?" kata pria yang memiliki banyak tato pada lengannya.

<p>"Come on, you didn't let me out, so of course I'm going to find a way!" she added, her voice tinged with a hint of mischief.</p>

The feeling didn't last long as it was soon replaced with anxiety, I had a difficult time breathing as I felt like I was being crushed. Thorn appeared to have sensed my distress since he was by my side in a second, both his hands on my shoulders, squeezing them reassuringly. I gave him a thankful smile as he made the crowd stand back. I've got to say, he might be annoying at times, but God is he a wonderful friend. Sarah stood in front of me again, practically jumping with happiness as she explained,