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The few chapters, The grammar was a little whacky, And some word's are missing, But eventually it gets better so good job, Your updates in chapters are very fast, But that will affect your grammar mistakes, So i recommend atleast slowing it down, The MC itself is pretty nice, I enjoy reading this so far

Heelo! Author here. I am writing this book for the spirity Contest. I hope it will be to your taste. let's start with few salient features of this book-1. Urban Fantasy guys... (I'm trying my hand at this genre)2. lots of Magic ( including vampires, werewolves, mages, demons, gods, etc.,)3.You need Badass Female characters, yes they will be delivered.4. lots of side characters with their own story and ships to follow.5.You want to dip to the Dark side, don't worry we will also go there. ( only occasionally you know, )6.Mystery and urban fantasy go hand in hand.7.Mc is getting introduced to the magic world and so are you ( so no fear of getting lost ) ;-) just ride along Mc in this shaky novel to witness the action, thriller, mystery, and adventure. Yeah, there are love interests too.P.S-Happy reading guys, just enjoy your life......

Genuinely disappointed in this story.  It started out good, imo, but honestly goes downhill fast once the 10,000 races are introduced.  MC starts killing off entire races and crowd commentaters are instantly heard and responded to.  Broad generalizations are made, indicating all sentients in a group are thinking/responding in the exact same way.  Old humans are behaving like immature teenagers.  Final straw for me was the MC killing, cooking and eating one of the 10,000 races in front of the area they all live.  That whole scene is just too disappointing for me to continue investing my time in this story when there are tons of other stories better worth my time.Translation is okay, I’ve read a lot worse ones and bore with it for the story.World setting is decent and I like some of the side characters.So… overall, 2.5/5.0.

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The concept is great. Unfortunately, the protagonist is both short-sighted and shallow. After finding out he has the power to not only digitalise (able to enter any software as a digital life form) but also to materialise anything from within to the real world...he decides to open a wholesale vegetable business. Not only is this subpar idea, but he's putting himself at risk - no sourcing, no transaction evidence, no storage...he has nothing to explain how he obtained his veggies. He just asks clients of his to 'promise not ask him.' Oh god.As for the MCs shallowness - he uses his powers to stroke his ego by acting the hero, to casually slap faces and of course can't forget wooing 'beauties.' Sigh...

Well above average but still too early to say anything conclusive. -Flawed but overall OK translation.-Interesting concept, plot has decent potential.-Worldbuilding is intentionally unclear, so I can't really evaluate it.-MC seems sentient but everybody else is a mob character. (So far apart from the MC there only seems to be 2 noteworthy named side characters; the general and the adjutant and even they seem to have limited use. Not much has been introduced).Overall not too well written but not too bad either. This does come across as awfully bland at times but it is nonetheless one of the stronger novels from this batch. 3/5.

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I'm loving the story's character development and world-building.  I'm looking forward to what's the story will turn out. Kudos to the writer.