Alpha's Purchased Luna

4/5 for passing time.
2/5 for genuine evaluation.
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It's not a bad work, but it's bland. The ideas around the novel's world are fun and unique though, making it a bit refreshing.
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My main issues with the story...
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- MC has an extremely bland personality, and there's nothing driving him apart from the author's forced circumstances.
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- Many holes and inconsistencies in the story. Everything felt like a convoluted mess, as if the author didn't do enough (finer-detail) planning in contrast to the grandeur of the story.
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- It also gets extremely repetitive. The title is accurate, far too accurate. It just feels like such a low-effort move from the author, and it impedes a lot of the story's potential.
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That's all. Basically, it's a waste of potential. The novel is lacking in emotional depth. The plot is interesting, but the depth of the author's planning was sub-par at best. It's enjoyable enough to pass your time, but it's not "one of the greats".

Wtf is ai intelligence

400+ chapters and He's still a virgin. It's like 120 years. My heart bleeds for him but, at the same time, it's so funny my sides hurts.

Nothin much and im open to retry it if u can tell about the story more?

When is it gonna update??

Is it good? I plan to read a few chapters

Yo Mr.ZaFool is this worth it??

it's a good read, but the chapters are duplicating.  please release the whole story.