It's Good. Very very Good. Excellent. Perfect. Happy Happy. Super Good. Really really good. Please get chosen. There's not much Urban novel that is good in 2021.
a good story with an MC who only cares about him and his quest to have eternal life !...............................mmmmmmmm....................................
This was nice, but I do have a couple complaints. First of all, I'm a bit lost on what his cheat actually does. He gets a bunch of cool stuff at the beginning thanks to it, but then never uses it again.Second, he's kinda dumb. I mean, he sends ALL of his SS rank units out. He has thousands, but he couldn't spare a couple to keep his workers from being injured? He almost permanently lost the unit type because he sent ALL of them into a dangerous area and only one survived.Plus there's this whole plot with a female character bribing her way onto his friends list, which never goes anywhere - we never hear from her again. Did the author just forget about her?
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
First, the writing quality is quite simple which is easy to follow and understand. However, it's kinda lacking in portraying the emotions of the Main character and other characters.Second, the story development is nice with lots of action. For those readers who like reading so much action stuff like playing a video game might like. But for readers who are after the story like watching cutscenes from video games, it's like the excessive fight scenes are being forced on us.Third, the Main character design is well done with a mysterious background for the MC. wish so was done for the support and some side characters too.Fourth, Updating is super slow.Fifth, the world background the author did for this the story is something I have never read before. I applaud to that.Overall, this book holds so much potential for improvement and to become a big story. Good luck.
Hey just wanna say ive been waiting for taming/per novel for a while. i have to say i like what ive seen. The only thing lacking is a sense of urgency but i guess thatll come later after all the first interactions and character presentations is over with. (Up to Ch.4). Keep it going.
Man!!! This is a wild ride! I can see such world building and detailed writing reach 2000+ chapters if continued properly. I also like the comedy here and there and the feeling of the characters having their own personalities being portrayed during exchanges.I could feel myself reading Lord of the Rings or Game of Thrones again.Nice job!!! Keep it up!
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