the author sucks at describing the fights... it's even at the level where it's frustrating to read...in addition there are too many useless descriptions which already make the fight not so well described more difficult to read, and besides the author stops redefining the description of the technique as well as the weapons each time one of your characters makes a attack, and above all we already know that water represses fire, no need to give such a detailed and boring description in each paragraph...for me it's the worst novel I've seen in terms of combat description! just too frustrating!
Perhaps my biggest issue is the lack of any descriptions of either settings or people. As a reader, you have no idea what any of the characters look like beyond some of them being simply described as "jade beauty". No hair/eye colour, hairstyle, clothes, places or settings are described, nothing about the architecture, décor, I'm not even 100% sure on what era this is set in or the current level of technology.Additionally, up to chapter 40 at least, there isn't any real sign of an overarching plot, beyond some vague hints in chapter 1. There is some conflict with "young masters
This is a really enjoyable story so far with good grammar and writing quality. There is still a lot of mystery as to how the protagonist got to where he is, but it is slowly being revealed in a compelling manner rather than with info dumps like many other stories use.
I have read up to 40 chapters. I can't read more cause I'm broke but anyway let me list out the things that I like: There are little to no grammatical errors. So you can pretty much read it smoothly.The world-building is great. The author set it up really well. There is no big info dumps about the world. At least for me, the author made the information about the world digestible. It didn't feel like explaining the world as if it's a textbook, explaining it for the sake of explaining but it feels like an adventure. This can be seen in the background of the MC. Instead of just simply explaining his background for one chapter or a paragraph, the author did a good job makin us curious about MC's background and showing it bit by bit instead of one big infodump. So for the people who read the first few chapters and think that the MC is stupid, bare with it as it will be explainin soon why he thought of it that way.MC: The MC is kinda developing in the first 40 chapters. You will know his morality, his priorities, his goal, and his character. If you're looking for a character that is calculative and will sacrifice anyone for his own goal, then no this is not a novel for you. The MC here is stupidly honest which is kinda refreshing. He can easily emphasize with anyone. Knows when he's fcked up and trying to adapt to this new world. He doesn't seem like a hypocrite so far.For the side characters:I'm liking the side characters so far, there might be cliches on them but the dialogs seem like something can come out from a human. I don't know how developed are they because I've only read up to chapter 40 but I'm already liking some of them. The things that I don't like:There are very slight spoilers ahead so be warned. They aren't big revelations. One of them is already in the tags lol. He has a system and it seems like he's the only one who has it. I like novels that has system if everyone has it, if it's only the MC I kinda don't like cause it undermines the future achievements of the MC. You can't help but sometimes think "If I have a system, then I'm pretty sure I can also do it." It doesn't make the MC special. It doesn't feel like he earned it. Yeah, you can say that the system didn't give it in a silver platter but you can also see how much of an advantage having a system is. Also, how can you say he's special if there's no one you can compare it to (i.e. other people having systems too). HOWEVER, that's the genre of the book so that's on me for reading it (I'm actually kinda hoping that everyone has the same system but yeah).The one that I dislike is him having a skill just by opening a book. This is just OP. I'm pretty sure we can all agree that he didn't earn it. For me, the appeal of weak to strong is the grind. And you can't remove hard work from grinding so if someone can earn a skill by just simply opening a book although it cost pain (which is just a few sentences) I'm sorry but I can't see the hard work there. I'm hoping that it's just an early boost but I would respect the author's decision and hope they have a better plan for it. But hey that's just me and if you like the MC having that skill then read it and I recommend you to read it cause it's really good this is just me not liking a small part of it. Don't let a random guy ruin what you like. TL;DRThis book is really great, Great World Building, Great Writing quality, Consistent Updates, Good story development, Great MC but a little bit of nitpick on some things that are related to the MC, would really recommend it to others.
Totally different from what I usually prefer to read but I have to say that this book is soo interesting and fun to read. Haven't quite read alot of it but I totally recommend it, good work author.
Heyo Readers, Seven here [Shameless Review]Well it's my second novel on wn, and if you have read my first one, then you must know how much Innocent of a writer I am 😊😂😌😆🤣So my new scapegoat's name is Xin, and he is pretty much of a smart, intelligent and overpowered character.But here is the catch, this great novel is being written by me. So I can't let him have a peaceful life, can I?! 🥺😌Join Xin and, enjoy his 2x Isekai adventure in the other world?!Well that's enough for now I think.Seven Out~~Nyaa~~*Cough feels cringey*
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