There were only four statues in this room however and all of them had an appearance similar to the boss of the 10th floor just made of stone and without the broken equipment. Each statue had glowing red eyes that exuded a heavy pressure. I was able to at least shake it off though.
I wore the suit after several seconds staring at it. Although sometimes it would be easy to wear, today my morning is extremely tired, usually, I would go to sleep before twelve o'clock, but not today. Some Game of Thrones fan like me would watch it until realization what they have two more hours to sleep, heh, fun times, sadly only at night I can feel self-free, not until I close my eyes, and fall in dreamless sleep. I feel like a drunkard after two bottles of vodka in this kind of mornings. But I wish it was for that reason, with that kind of job just two bottles of vodka wouldn't be enough. Honestly, all the cases are mostly solved that way, so the extra bottle would always help. Indeed, I always have it in my bag, just in a case.
She had a shock expression in her face... before she start to talk she take a big 'gulp...' 'what!!! I as class ??? what!!!class?monitor????huh..!!'her thought in her mind...
It's a good start and the grammar isn't too bad. The chapters are a decent length and the ending of the first chapter does make you want to keep reading. It tends to Tell vs Show quite a bit, but that's easy to fix and should resolve as the author really gets into the heads/mannerisms of their characters.
Very nice plot.Actually giving the readers who to hate in Chapter 1 is a great way to to start a story in this case it was LuchenEverything is a 10/10 except the tenses in the writing like some words were used in present tense instead of past tensebut overall it's good
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