AGOT: The Dragon Knight

Interesting to read, even if I think that the charakterdevolopment isn´t  really my type.........................................................................

It's not completely unreadable. I finished the whole thing.I regret spending the time on it. It's longer than it needs to be, the characters are absolutely one-dimensional, the plot devices are re-hashed MULTIPLE times, the author repeats the same information over and over and over and over, and the plot armor of the MC could take a shot from the death star without a scratch. There's zero thought put into the actual measurements of...anything (a sword strike few thousand times the speed of light is apparently totally able to miss somebody that is ten TRILLION kilometers tall at point blank range. That's trillion, with a T. Also, TRILLIONS of years go by in the blink of an eye, multiple times. Also, the ending was boring enough I would find myself skimming the text to pick out key words. I love to read, if the end of your novel is less of a "what happens next!" and more of a "bah, I'm 88% in on this 1400+ chapter novel, might as well take the time to finish" then you've failed as an author.It honestly felt like he was trying to pad the novel length, rather than actually improve the quality. Sometimes less is more.However, the translation quality was fantastic. There were some additional footnotes added to explain several of the more esoteric mythology introduced and that was certainly much appreciated.

one of the best novel out There.  hope it will be back some day in the Future. and if you love this novel read    the My Doomsday Territory   its bean translated at the moment at https://systemtranslation.com/2020/07/10/my-doomsday-territory-chapter-49/

Great novel author.  A fantasy story with lots of crafting.  I can't wait to read more, especially as you develop the world some more.  I also like his sometimes different uses of his smithy skill.

This is a nice write up from the author. It has a smooth plot and a good pace too. The author should keep up with the great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍

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"Romeo, no need to be courteous, only those who grew with me surround us, and you are such one, I remember each one of us followed you around since we admired you" the King chuckled at the memories of their child hood, Romeo was ten years older than him and remembers how he first met Romeo. At that time. Romeo was eighteen then and was following around his father as an apprentice just like his son was following him now.