Seeing Feng Jin Yuan express this, the matriarch relaxed and returned to Shu Ya courtyard with the support of grannies and maidservants. Others began to find it improper to continue staying, so they all began to leave. As Jin Zhen left, she looked affectionately towards Feng Jin Yuan. Feng Jin Yuan waved to her but did not say anything extra.
Primero que nada esta bien tu primer capitulo, pero necesitas pulirlo un poco por ejemplo: los diálogos, los pensamientos y la descripción están todos juntos lo que hace difícil la lectura y confusa. Te recomiendo que mejores eso.....si de verdad continuaras escribiendo. Y de paso leete la mi.
"He's okay guys he recovered but there's more, that all happened six months after we were separated but one year later the Marines tried to capture the Sunny but it was protected by one more person... Bartholomew Kuma" Franky finished.
A slice-of-life reincarnation fantasy story with a focus on world-building and character development. I would appreciate it if you would at least try out the first 20 chaps before deciding on the novel and its content. I only plan on writing one webnovel this year, and this is it. So thanks for reading; I wish you all a good day.
Slow paced stories are normally a hit or miss. This wasn't a hit. This was a straight-up massacre.Firstly, Zain is an incredibly written main character. We rarely find a character who has such a severe level of self-loathing, and in retrospect, he was right to hate himself.He is an incredible person, and his resolve is like I've ever read before. Considering his role as an (you'll know what if you read it), I don't expect him to be a villain, but an anti hero who wants to live the way he was supposed to; peacefullyThis is a freaking 1,000,000/10. Incredible pacing with great depth and storytelling that old webnovels don't even have or new novels are trying (and failing) to achieve. You did an amazing job here, Arthur-San! Can't wait for more updates💯
Leaving a review here because I'm a die hard fan of MXTX and all her works. This is a work of art, and it's a very interesting novel, i have all five volumes, but I will always support Wangxian whenever, or wherever I see it because Wei Wuxian and Lan Wangji story is so beautiful that I can't get over it. 🫶🫶
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