A very bored vampire in another world

This story is a wild adventure of epic! With a MC that makes you feel as if you’re sitting on your best friend’s couch, watching him play games late at night and a complex structure that engulfs the reader in its world, you won’t want to put it down. It’s evident the author has put a painstaking amount of research into video games, monsters, VR and Asian culture. This is a story that places you in the middle of a death game and you aren’t sure if you’ll survive the next boss fight. Extremely well written and deserving of your read.

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it a really good novel but I don't ha enough ______________fast passes ______________________________________________________________________________________________

The story starts out fairly interesting with a uniquely mature protagonist, finding his place in a new world and it's pretty interesting for a couple of chapters but after a certain event where the protagonist kills someone he shouldn't have and needs to go on the run, the story gradually becomes stale, the chapters become more long winded and I can't really get into anything because the story and characters seem to have become nearly completely aimless, I even skimmed like half of the chapters I've read and I never felt like I missed out a single thing. The protagonist has had completely no development since early on, and while the side characters do develop, they're very basic characters through and through, nothing special to see there. Everything always somehow just works out for the protagonist and there are plot holes as ridiculous as one chapter an arm of the protagonist get broken and the next it's like the author completely forgot...The worst thing about the translation is that htere are often pov changes that happen without any indication, we're literally talking about 1 paragraph being from mc's perspective and the next from another's, there's no transition at all most of the time. It's quite ridiculous.

Maybe this would become something more - Not sure... I hope so tho... I have a feeling he would have an impact on my life...

"Why?"

「Then shall I massage you on the bed every day before going to sleep? If you are a good girl then I will reward you a lot.」

Forster, E.M. Aspects of the Novel. 1927. San Diego: HBJ, 1955.