I really love your story is this still hanging?I'm hoping for sooner update I like it very much,I hope the Luna have the powers to flee herself as she is white wolf,, update author,, Love you, ...️...️...️
I'm writing this review as of chapter 70. I think this series has a lot of potential! But it could use some work to realize it. I know it currently has over 800 chapters at the time of this writing so maybe these issues are addressed by now but I'm just giving my thoughts about what I've read so far. I think this story takes a very different approach to stories that involve the main character having a system in a world where everyone has one. Systems are generally made to make the growth of the characters easier and or faster than it would be without one. After all, why spend years working out and training relentlessly to become strong when you can just level up and do quests? But with this work, the bad guys are manipulating the game/system to try and make it so the main character and the rest of humanity don't get strong. So the main character has to be smart enough to find ways to make the system work for him instead of against him. All while screwing over the bad guys that are trying to screw him over. It helps the story feel unique. I also like that there doesn't seem to be much Deus Ex Machina going on. Every challenge the MC wins against is because of his strategies and not because he pulled some power out of nowhere. But there are problems. One is that are are fairly frequent grammatical and spelling errors. Some are more noticeable than others. The second problem is that the story doesn't seem to know if it wants to be a harem or not. It also seems like there's a bit too much info given at once to keep track of sometimes. It just feels like the story's scope is already way too big for where it currently is. But overall I think this is a pretty good work that deserves a good look.
We have seen this kind of novels....the mc start thing with his dick.. Start fucking every girl he sees...and when he becomes powerful he starts acting like a dickhead...am not saying it's bad but this kind of novels leave a bad taste in my mouth....if am not wrong he will start forcing some ladies to have *** with him if they want to be Superstars
Novel is nice, i like it very much. He takes both china and the rest of the world by storm whit his products. Has quite a lot of face slapping. Only thing i really hate about is, is that MC is a arrogant dickhead who treatds women like toys that has only one purpose, to please him. His now sleeping whit 2 women on same time, and has a third one who hes sending letters to, most likely will sleep whit her to when he finally meets her face to face. That makes it 3 women he sleeps whit at the same time, while one of the women is the one he wants to marry, and he keeps telling her how much he loves her, but moment she turns her back to him, he runs of to **** other women. And btw the other woman he fucks is a underaged (14-15years) girl so kinda a girl (child) and not a woman. And the woman he wants to marry is so god damn perfect, he dosent deserve her at all. I hope she finds out about him cheating on her and dumps him.
It makes me feel as if I am present. Like the scene is happening in front of me. As a fan of supernatural and fantasy movies and books, I am so interested in knowing what would happen next.I really love this book🤗
"Wait! Sherry-senpai! This is THE Japan limited premium vanilla frappucino! I can't just finish it quickly! It's such a waste!" A girl with waist-long wavy hair said as she slowly slurped her drink with a blissful face.
all the time I was thinking about Rick... why did he talked that way to Cris... do they know each other... and why did Rick said that he don't believe in friendship.... first I have to find.. what is the connection between Cris and Rick....
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