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  1. DanielKennedy8979
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    Did he really betrayal them or his shield is just passive thing he cant turn off? Pretty sure he wouldnt be risking it at this moment
  1. Patherornt
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    Betrayal #586869

    Don't let your guard down around elves
  1. PSRInvincible
    PSRInvincible rated it
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    Even better
  1. racismisgood
    racismisgood rated it
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    Holy shit, a next day update, I'm a psychic
  1. Govind3780
    Govind3780 rated it
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    Well that was convenient and anticlimatic.
  1. TheATK
    TheATK rated it
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    And stop spamming this shit
  1. mysticdark100
    mysticdark100 rated it
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    It just makes me want to cry like a girl
  1. CastlePandajK1
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    Author be like "quality over quantity"
  1. Clamiral_del_eau
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    zhuge liang
  1. LamenThiefqxa
    LamenThiefqxa rated it
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    Anyways. This is farewell. I don't know how unlikely it is, but thinking about it now, this may be written by a child, somewhere between the ages of 13-16. I wish the authour luck with this series and all his future endeavours. Reading this back, I used some harsh words, but I hope people can see that the general idea behind most of my criticism lies in the lack of sensical character motivations, with later criticism attacking the lack of forethought and world building. Establish rules in your writing, especially for combat, otherwise it's nothing but pretty drawings. The people of the world are not stupid, don't just pick the first cool idea that pops into your head.
  1. Ypsilanti
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    as corny as it is i like when love is the answer lol. also it's real funny that they turned into some weird dragon
  1. DantesinfernormR
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    Do not make her into a he, ffs, plz author. Do not !!!

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