Hatsukoi Shimai

It was fine

I like that, my go to was always, “if it’s stupid but it works, it’s still stupid but it works”

Man's denser than an isekai protagonist

You know... I think it would be good to have at least two chapters where things don't go belly up, not saying not to have "things" happening, I just think it would be interesting if not even fun to see Yuru dealing with the modern world.

And the daily lives of all the other characters too, I mean... sure, things just took a turn for the worst in their lives... but in a very depressing way, that is part of their daily lives.

Anyway... seeing Hikaru addressing how his father runs the clan was interesting, it is a good detail that they do know the chief can be manipulative, but they do understand too that things aren't as simple as just saying "using others is bad", Hikaru isn't wrong but unfortunately... Gabby isn't wrong either.

The whole situation in this story can take sharp turns.

Dera is right, Hana is a queen... an overworked queen, but one still XD.

Yuri sucks ass

Chapter 11, page 9, I'm disappointed the chapter didn't even last 10 seconds.

Good times.

Still his best work up there with Goodbye, Eri.