Nozomanu Fushi no Boukensha Chapter v2 Discussion

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This is the review for the LN (don't know if the WN is the same)

This novel is plagued with internal monolog syndrome that makes the novel feel very dry and boring.

The first novel is mainly talking without much going on, doesn't help that the POV switch at times can be confusing and unnecessary. MC is boring and I would say kind of s*upid in the choices in the first novel.

Had to stop at the second novel since it was just as dry, it's not the world building that makes it dry it's the MC himself and the way it's wrote.
 
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