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Bless me for having the patience to read this far.The story is going nowhere. The MC is incompetent. I don't care how his disciples respect him, or how OP he is; it's a fact that he always made blunders, and somehow everything went exactly like he wants.What use is his swordmanship if all he does is making blunder? How could he thought that he was a 'mediocre' yet he held himself back in fight, even against a master swordsman? Where's your 'mediocre'-mentality, MC?Spoiler
He fought against Church Knight who was pretty good at fencing, got cornered multiple times... until his disciple came and helped him. After his disciple left him to pursue the fleeing bishop, MC utterly owned the Church Knight in few (3-4) paragraphs, as if his previous struggle (2 chapters long) was a complete bullcr@ps
[collapse]Have you ever seen someone who think himself as a mediocre yet held back in competition because, who knows, maybe he knew he was too good at it compared to his enemies?Get your sh¡t together, author. The inconsistencies are so mind-boggling it's not even funny.