A Story Of Taking Home A Lonely Gal From My Class And Turning Her Into An Elegant Beauty Chapter v21 Discussion

  • Thread starter DarjaRenen
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  • #1
I often wonder what title other commenters are reading when I check out their reviews. Here, for example, I'm told this is a story about a young man g*ooming his perfect girlfriend out of a troubled classmate. The story I'm reading, however,

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is about an over-responsible young man burying his feelings for his first love so deeply that he refuses to acknowledge even the possibility of their existence and ignoring the entreaties of his friends, his family and even the girl herself to accept his own wants, instead choosing to point her toward a path where she can walk without him.

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  • #2
The writing is good. The plot is interesting, but I totally lost interest at chapter 19.  It feels like the story stalled and just fizzled out.
 
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