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I haven't read much so not entirely sure what to think about this novel... The writing style is definitely not to my taste since I prefer I guess more wordy prose. This really is more of a dialogue back and forth. It's a style choice that some people might like, I'm not that someone. But that's not to say it definitely is bad.I do think it has potential but at the same time it feels like I'm just reading a draft for a story that could be good. I'd rate it 3.5 but rounding up since I have not read far and not sure if I will. It can still get better.Their relationship... so far I'm having trouble feeling the chemistry (no, not counting pheromones) but the ML could be the typical not-sure-who-he-likes at first since it does seem like he subconsciously liked MC from a while back despite going with the flow of pursuing oriMC.As for the non-con, Spoiler
I have only seen the first instance of handjob, and while it wasn't too bad, it did feel entirely unnecessary. I don't really think it added anything to the story in any case.
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