- #1
- I think the plot is well written. Not too fast, not too slow, my eyes don't glaze over from boredom. It is a bit of a slow burn, Spoiler
it's ch 185 and while she has a relationship with her husband, it is not properly romantic yet. Just teasing each other and some tension, but I feel like the pacing of their relationship is just right.
[collapse]And I like how they mention that if you lose weight too fast you get loose skin, she she is doing it slowly so the skin can naturally go back. I really like that, and find it rare in novels with "ugly to beauty tropes". Overall I rate this a 4/5 but if the authors had time to sit down and really mull over this story, fixing inconsistencies and all that it would be perfect.
