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I had to end this on chapter 111. It just became a bit too confusing. The way it is translated is confusing and choppy. The time skips seem weird. Is it years or days? I like the idea of a strong female lead levelling up; but I'm lost after chapter 100 and it gets a bit confusing. There were a few good reviews saying this is worth the read; However, it's the paragraph structure and the style of writing that causes this story to lose in semantics. I'm very annoyed that I got this far and lost interest because the confusing structure and world building. Maybe it just needs a different editor who can add notes to help the reader along in the story. Please! This was just a good start and I really do want to finish; but not under this style. It's a bit irritating.
