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Well, the premise is fun, I'm always up for a bit of obsessive charakters.The execution is a bit lacking though, it's not bad, but it's a bit inconsistent every now and then. And the pacing feels a bit rushed same with the details in the story of when things happen.The MC has indeed taken over a villain that has done some sketchy things already, so he wants out. But after saving a few guys that has a big brother with a major brother complex, it becomes rather hard when they won't really let him. That and along with some other issues he needs to face, he's in for hard time in getting away from these guys. Couse the little brothers he saved are also very attached.... Sigh, poor guy.I hope it get's better written over time, so we'll see. I do hope so, since I do like the story it's trying to tell.But don't take my word for anything, give it a try and see, maybe it hits home for you.
