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I understand that authors want their readers to feel interested. They do this by persuading the readers that there are more to this story so don't go yet. But it causes the differently if you keep giving your readers a lot of plots until it keeps piling up. I understand you want it to be mysterious and then at the end give a shocking reveal or at least give your readers a thrill or a good story where they can be interested, but doing it halfheartedly, it gets boring.Another thing:I don't get the obsession for gender bending/crossdressing? I don't have anything against gay people out there but it gets on my nerves when a boy in the story turns into a girl and keeps on being liked by the girls. What is with that? I mean, does it work? I read books for my imagination, if I can't imagine it to work, it will only be irritating for me, especially when this boy turns girl stuff seems to be endless.Anyway, that is it for me. I'm staying out of novels like this. QUIT....
