Can We Become a Family? Chapter Completed Discussion

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The story will mostly be based on FL's childhood, but the second part where thr FL grows up will be fast-paced, too fast that I feel that the author poured all the character development into the childhood.

Latter part of the story is mostly all about god's and their incarnates. When FL is 20y/o.

About FL

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Lives 9 lives, and the last life where she got the power of the moon. In this life she will find her real dad and live a happy life with him. The power of the moon will also have 2 abilities, the story will develop ot into 5 phases, 4th phase would be so fast that FL barely even used it in the story, but in the 5th phase, she destroyed the trauma of her childhood.

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About ML:

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ML won't have much part in the story since the story mostly follow what the FL does. ML does realize about his love for FL after a few years, after 8+ years, FL will realize her love for him. ML will even become FL's dad incarnate (which wouldn't really have any scene in the story, but is only used as a dowry).

Love rivals? He has but they're mostly just obsessed with FL.

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FL's Dad:

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FL's Dad would become a sticky rice to his daughter, getting jealous easily towards people as well as sometimes acting like a kid towards his daughter. He also loves his wife so much that he had a marriage with her even when he knew she passed away.

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  • #2
These are by far the best books on this app. I love the use of grammar and the unique love story with each couple. Can’t wait for Nessa’s story!!!
 
  • #3
This story is very interesting please update soon
 
  • #4
good story, well developed characters. but could have used some background on mafia. he needed more background on growing up in mafia and his family life.
 
  • #5
Wish I could give more than five stars! I absolutely loved this story. I was great!
 
  • #6
Not a fan of the height difference in the main characters. It made him less attractive and a little creepy(?). Maybe I’m just really not into short dudes.
 
  • #7
author ....this man is disgusting... don't end them together like typical dark romance books where female fell in love with rapist husband ....she deserves much better person .....and please don't give alternative ending......give a happy to Sierra with someone good not this man
 
  • #9
Thanks for the update on Javier & Clarabelle & their exchange on Draven.Would be heartbroken if Ella did not resolve & find her love for Javier.That would be unjust to them. Ella is somehow punishing Javier.What abt her mother who ruined Ella's childhood by her lies, arrogance& selfishness?
 
  • #11
this book is one of my favorite, loved the story and characters, good job to the author ;-)
 
  • #12
This book is beyond amazing! It is so different than other books on here and it is so well thought out, little to no grammar issues, and so intriguing! You'll never want to stop reading!
 
  • #13
To avoid aggravation, l am reading completed shorter stories, gives satisfaction & allows me to check back on latest last 2 chapters dropped. So far author still with writer’s block on how to end this book & make us want to read a new one. Oh, well!
 
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