Betrayal Knight’s Joyful Faith Chapter 24 Discussion

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  • #1
Arrogant this, arrogant that, the author and all the characters in this novel have only ever one thing to say about the protagonist: He's arrogant. Except he's not. At all.

They also cannot decide whether he's loyal or a traitor. One moment he's being asked to do things only a loyal man could be trusted with. The next, he's being told he's a traitor that cannot be trusted. I just get the feeling like it's not the characters in the novel that all have the exact same problem, it's just the author who can't seem to keep characterization consistent with plot progression.

All in all I quickly tired of the vapid conversations that seemed to lead nowhere and inconsistent characterization. The protagonist doesn't seem to think about anything in particular concerning his situation. He just seems to thrive on doing his best to make everyone around him frustrated and impotent. This is briefly amusing but quickly just becomes tiresome.

I gave up after chapter 24.
 
  • #2
I really love your books and the stores about this family, i can’t wait to read Mike’s store, but i was waiting for the wedding of Gabe and rivers and the delivery of there first baby
 
  • #3
This story is about our princess..  sweet and kind and lovable, but piss her off and you will feel the wrath.
 
  • #5
Happy 100 comments to this poor book. A piece of shit to the author.
 
  • #7
This was a incredibly beautiful book. I loved it and couldn't stop reading. Thank you.
 
  • #8
I f’ing love Al and Kia and their story. I went from crying to laughing and every other emotion repeatedly. I now have insomnia and probably will get sleep when I catch up to Moonlight Muse. Need IG to find and follow.
 
  • #9
So much money was spent for the story to turn into crap!  New readers or anyone who have not got to Shelly’s character need to abandon the novel and save your hundred dollar(s) on all the nonsense that will take place. So many heartbreaks and unresolved storylines.  Sorry I wasted my money.
 
  • #10
its olay.nothing more  to say. oh ah...expensive as well.
 
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