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Is tastes like the summary of an actual story. Carefully edited and with long chapters but there's not a lot of interesting things.Relationship's and dialogues are lacking, most of the story is a description of what is happening, characters don't talk most of the time and their emotions are directly stated "she/he was feeling impressed, sad, angry".It's boring, the MC does bring change to the plot but it's just taking advantage while letting the plot continue on the original track, like saving Neville from the fall, hermaiony from the troll, etc. Which could be interesting if the actual interaction between characters was good but no, there's no emotion on these puppets.Also MC is a genius Jack of all trades, know it all. He doesn't has any flaws and is way ahead of his peers so yeah.
