- #1
Honestly speaking I like the story and how it progress....... sadly tho, I think the author is a bit inexperiended in writing...... we will often met with sudden changes in situation that confuses us and only after a few more line that we realized that scene had changed.... we will also finds that something happened in the previous chapter, that shold be elaborated more in the next, but he didn't he made a new scene altogether in the next chapter.... this two points will often made you felt a sense of incongruity I also felt that some chapters or parts of the novel could be expanded more to give a sense of liveliness to the novel instead of just rushing it a bit (nope not the cliche parts) and some parts also poorly written or so sudden that I felt like "ukay..... er... huh?" (This is my exact though when I read that his father will confront the dragon that is on uts way to academy I felt like he just suddenly popped out there ready to die)....Overall, I like the story.... so far I reached ch. 53, just a bit after he failed to capture the mercenary... I actualy kinda like this parts.... many.... in so many more (although not all) reincarnation, transmigration, etc that the MC suddenly become godly genius who always succeed in whatever they did (i actualy find this part weird, or eiree) even monkey falls from the tree, more so people without much experience.... the fact that the stronger MC lose to a much more experienced foe is something that I like very much, feom here on MC will steadily grow and learn from his past mistakes (i hope).....Rating should be 5, bit alas.... the way it is writtten force mw to only give 3.5 for this......
