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This novel is of similar quality as "Transmigrated into a Mary Sue Novel" but without any of the fun and comprehensibility. Really, this novel is nigh unreadable. Conversations are structured as both regular dialogue and script format (like "character A: [line]" and "character A said, '[quote]'"). Grammar and sentence structures are also ignored to such a degree that a MTL can only take so much of the blame. I genuinely can't tell when characters are talking in a group chat or speaking verbally. I sometimes can't even figure out who is talking to who. For a story that has little action and a LOT of dialogue, this is a huge detriment to the understanding and enjoyment of the story.Of course, as mentioned in the previous reviews, logic is thrown out the window. I doubt that this is a spoof or parody of mary sue novels, because the tone of the story is played pretty straight when the MC isn't faceslapping. Even if you're looking for an easy and lighthearted read, you'll have a tough time keeping up with the ridiculous plot developments here. It's one thing to write a novel that plays clichés and tropes straightforwardly as fun indulgence, but it's another to do the same but act like the MC is a well-written, reasonable, not-at-all-a-power-fantasy-slash-self-insert kind of character. You'll be better off with other light reads than this.Spoiler
And I still can't say why nor when the ML fell in love with the FL. Like, I get the MC is beautiful, a great singer, attractive, pretty, and uhhhhh alluring but, that's it? She never came across as particularly witty in front of the ML either from what I can recall and I'm already on ch101. Dude fell in love with her looks and hot body, let's not pretend otherwise.._.
[collapse]Edit: SpoilerSystem: get married
Meng Chu: ok where's the closest single guy around here
And that's how Meng Chu decided to marry Lu Jingan, aka ML. There wasn't even an attempt at courtship or flirting between the two on Meng Chu's part. *Facepalm*
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