The Main Heroines are Trying to Kill Me Chapter 25? Discussion

  • #1
Honestly no idea why someone would read this. It's a fake villain story except it's more along the line of tragedy. I feel little to no enjoyment while reading it. I only like the moments with Kania

The plot is quite predictable and contrived. There are small issues that make the author seem a little smooth, and then issues that make the protagonist seem like a ret*rd, or even the author again. Small ones first.

The famous auction somehow didn't have any protection, weird. I mean someone could just take something and nobody would do anything about it. Next power scaling. We have literally no idea what stats mean, which makes it easy for the author to have the MC instantly kill a DEMON GENERAL and then get bodied by someone without even knowing if it makes sense (it doesn't). Then Kania says "but at the academy everyone is equal". She should know this is obviously false, both from a logical point of view and the fact that she has regressed to the past.

Big ones. Why does the MC trust the Sun God Spoiler

at chapter 25 or so it is not so subtly hinted that the Sun God isn't to be trusted

[collapse] but he is obviously not trustable. So first of all keep that in mind for later on but for some reason the Sun God is giving their blessing to a character that wants to kill the hero, weird aint it. Also why does he need to act evil? I know it says that the world will be destroyed if he doesn't use the False Evil System (FES) but why? Like does that even make sense that it would change anything. I would understand if it was because he wanted everyone to live at the end, including him, but that isn't even the reason. And the reason he would survive with the FES is that once everything is over he can ask the Sun God to revive him, strange he's brought up again.

I also just don't like it, I prefer fake villain stories where the MC is actually doing well, not getting f*cked at all corners of his life. Go read Despite Being Pursued As a Villain, All The Heroines On My Side? (Edit: Or don't, I actually don't like that one, maybe I meant The Villain's Diary – The Heroine's Character Crumbles) It does this but the MC is actually happy and you don't need to read a sad man having an unfun life. Or do that, it sounds exhilarating. And maybe not The Villain Wants to Live, I heard the MC gets cucked, muy triste. Maybe that's false but I'm not gonna read 300 chapters just to watch the main characters love interest get dicked down.

Someone said the world is too black and white but that is just false, the MC is a clear example, and I assume he was talking about the nobles but that's in every novel. And even then there are some moments where he gives examples to people who are very clearly not just black and white.

Ok that's it.
 
  • #3
Unique story. writing skills are awesome. Author able to present the story in a different way and I love to read this story.
 
  • #4
Please give us more chapters to read, the book so interesting and I love it
 
  • #5
Good reads. The plot is interesting. I like Dakota's funny and smart personality. Martin was also a little bit of mystery, but I like how he denies his feelings for Dakota and shows it over and over. Thank you also, author, for updating regularly.
 
  • #7
So if you want a sappy love concurs all book with some pretty ... scenes this is the book for you!! I love the no cheating and that they actually learned fairly early to communicate so nor a bunch of drawn out heartbreak.  Thank you author ... ...️
 
  • #8
Finished the book and I’m blown away by how amazing it was!! I wished I would have found out about Samantha Doyle later so I had more books to read!!
 
  • #9
want more please your story line is fantastic and leaves this reader wanting more lol so hurry please
 
  • #10
It was a great story, but hard to follow at times due to grammatical errors and choppy English. Not to mention, character mixups.  I would suggest getting a proofreader for your next story.
 
  • #12
Story line is average, had a hard time reading this though as English is definitely not this authors first language. Ended up deleting it after trying to give it a chance.
 
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