- #1
I think that there’s something to like about this story, but it would be extremely disingenuous to say that it is anything close to flawless. I think my biggest problem with the story is how messy it feels. It’s simply trying to do to much simultaneously for me. It wants a mystery, a drama, a tragedy, a psychological thriller horror something and it’s just not working for me.I have no idea how much the story has progressed in these thirty chapters. It’s not that the plot hasn’t progressed, because it has, it’s that the main character doesn’t feel like they’ve progressed and I blame the ever present mood.I don’t know, I want to like this story, but it’s just drenched in angst and dark adulting moodiness. Every one is angry or sad, and the story goes” No. This is not enough!”It might get better and all I need to do is hold on and keep reading, but I not going to do that. The are other stories, better and worse, that I will enjoy more, so I will be dropping this one.If the premise was interesting, I suggest you try it. If you hate it then I’m sorry. If you love it, great. Really, if you enjoy this, you are most definitely on one extreme of the S&M spectrum. And if you related to any character in this story, go get some help. I mean it.
