Memoirs of the Returnee Chapter 173 Discussion

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  • #1
This novel is good at the start, its interesting at the start...

But, the slow paced story can be annoying, I know there are many things happens at once that is why the screen time are going here and there, and some characters only having a bit of screen time, especially Libra, surprisingly the main target of MC have really little screen time beside the early chapters (even until ch 173 that I read while writing this review), no info whatsoever, no screen time for the characters from Libra that already introduced, but too much time in academy and also its events, that at some point feels repetitive instead of progression of story, and for an "ACTION" novel it really lack depths for the fighting act (imo), only short battles sometimes and most in the middle are planning and dialogs during the supposedly "ACTION" screen time.
 
  • #3
Just heads up, it's very far from romance novel, it's more of a thriller or suspense or something...
 
  • #4
oh Mercy Crown everyone is getting upset!  Hope after all the suffering it's worth while, the release of one chapter daily is killing us!  My heart goes out to both Em and Eva XOXO
 
  • #6
I’m not much of a reader. However I could t put this book down!
 
  • #7
It was a good story but some of the grammar was atrocious and editing on the second half was non existent. It read pretty smoothly through the first part but the last half full of errors. Many seemed like autocorrect errors.
 
  • #8
Mind Blowing. their first kiss was really wierd. like seriousally how Elena came back to the Office what she did am excited to know
 
  • #11
Great job on this story! I can't wait to read more from this author!
 
  • #13
long but worth the read. now on to book 2
 
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