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At first I had high hopes because the MC was different from the norm, but it didn't take long for the series to fall into bad cliches. A lot of the conflicts feel forced and poorly thought out.Spoiler
At one point, the MC needs saving, but the ML is unable to for a few days. The MLs people know the MC is in danger, but what do they do? Some magic tracking that conveniently is only ready right after the ML is back. Let's not bother telling the MCs brother who has a literal army he could have used to look for her.
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