- #1
The entire bit about the identity and past of MC’s parents are revealed solely for the reader’s knowledge and it’s not revealed slowly as the MC finds out about his origin and his parents. It just didn’t make sense for the author to just put out the entire backstory right in the first few chapters just so that readers know. It has no suspense, no mystery, no guessing for the reader. The explanation of the past relationship (or lack thereof) between MC’s parents is just pathetic and rushed. The MC’s omega father just suddenly enter his heat during an important mission and the Alpha father just suddenly has to get to the omega father despite the omega father’s orders to not let anyone near him. And there goes the predictable route of omega in heat and alpha having s*x with the omega blah blah pheromones and secret crush. Author could’ve build the entire thing a little more, but nooo. BAM omega father is pregnant and he ran away and “died”. And the alpha is like omg surprised pikachu face I had a crush on you but I never told you.
[collapse]I just can’t go on reading. This feels like some badly written fan fiction catered towards young teenagers. Everything feels rushed, secrets/plot points get revealed so quickly for no apparent reason. Plus, the internal monologue of these characters are cringe worthy.
