I Became the Vicious Senior Brother of “White Cut Black” Junior Brother Chapter Completed Discussion

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It's fun up to a certain point, then it became really tiring because the two main characters have differences they can't resolve. It's like watching a married couple put 'irreconcilable differences' on why they divorce, even though they like each other very much. Don't worry this is still a fun novel, it's just by the end I'm getting really tired of the same old problem popping up again. It's the same schtick, it's abit like watching someone keep running their head on a wall and getting surprised every time. Also the MC... he's a hypocrite sometimes, it can get annoying near the end.

Anyways, it's still a happy ending? Kind of a mess of a story, some parts makes me go 'is this really relevant?' but it's still a nice past time.
 
  • #3
Story is great... Anyway why can't I see your other book author?
 
  • #5
I have to admit,  your writing technique is my favorite.  it's so eloquent.
 
  • #6
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good.
 
  • #7
Thank you for writing. I just started reading it. However, I hope you can prove read it before posting because of the amount of spelling and grammar errors I started losing my interest in the first chapter. I hope to find my interest back down the line. I wish you all the best.  Thank you.
 
  • #8
I am looking forward to see how the children turn out, especially Dane with his mysterious beginning
 
  • #10
your writing skills are way more better than so many book published writers..... you are amazing
 
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