My Housemaid Is The Most Beautiful Girl In School Chapter 51 Discussion

Think of this as Otonari Tenshi but they're actually living together and title is kinda misleading because the maid thing is kinda a joke between them, and isn't mentioned all that much.

plot

our boy Lee hwi-min is a college student but homie is rich because he invests in stock. His family was poor and when he's was young he saw graphs for stock and was like "ho ho you can get money by clicking some buttons and buy looking at number on the computer", so he just did that. And this this the part where it's like Tenshi-sama because as you expected his house is dirty as f*ck, so he hires a housekeeper to do the annoying sh*t for him. And surprise surprise, it's the cutest girl at the academy and they start living together because she thinks that he isn't interested in her and he's also the same way, like Tenshi-sama.

Now for my personal evaluation, while it is good, I mean you can't really go wrong with some pure wholesome romance, it also has some bad points. For example the confession was forcedSpoiler

first off si-eun' family isn't rich and her mother is ill and in the hospital, so our author decides to use that fact to make the confession. It's not that I hate it, since they both actually love each other, just that it feels rush and sudden. Like sometimes a sudden confession is good like when it's the right mood and when the story is already kinda developed to an extent. But this one happens quite early too early in fact. Well it's just a small thing.

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second thing is the lack of things other than our main couple? Idk Whachu call it but even though it has school in the title it doesn't actually talk much about it. I mean sure there was exam and other stuff like that but we barely see the relationships and just things overall about the other people at school. Maybe it's just because I'm only one third of the way done and they'll just said it later but right now it doesn't talk much about it.

The last thing isn't really the story's fault but mtl's fault. For machine translations, my mind can usually instantly filter out the wrong pronouns and wrong grammar or I just have to reread it once more but for this one, I just had to straight up skip some because they were so confusing and a lot of the times we don't even know who's talking. But since it's just a romance novel without any heavy plot some things you don't need to completely understand.

Also sometimes how embarrassed they are don't make sense like once they were trying out glasses and that were complimenting each other and they didn't even blush. Though sometimes they blush just saying I missed you, personally I think they're on the same level of embarrassment so they shouldn't feel that way saying that, but it isn't that big of a deal. For me at least, I don't know boutchu.

now for character

imagine Tenshi-sama but MC has more balls and less dense by a bit. Like if Amane is a neutron star then our lee is iron out somethin. And si-eun is basically mahiru but no family conflict.

overall not bad, could get batter or worse depending on how the author does things in the next 100 chaps.

3.8 or 3.9 as of c51