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The novel's plot, if there is any, is paper thin. The premise is that she's in a book, she dreamt of the plot and so on.But then, she doesn't know her parents after waking up? Huh?! She obviously didn't also change her 'tough' personality, she's been like that since birth, it's been repeatedly written to your face as if the reader will forget it. But then we're supposed to believe that she became a love struck fool idiot in the novel that committed su*cide because she couldn't get her love? A disconnect here, for real.It's hard to connect with Lu Wan, unless you're an impressionable girl who believes that you're "not like other girls".I find it funny and hypocritical of the author to paint the OG novel as a dogblood drama and the OG FL for a Mary Sue but made Lu Wan a much worse Mary Sue lol.