The Main Characters That Only I Know Chapter 46 Discussion

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  • #1
Start with an original premise, but it flops for me, it lost itself into boredom and pandering. Long useless description and mental monologue from the MC, and cringe nonsensical moral lessons (and highly hipocritical) make me say enough, I can't keep pushing.

The MC being highly unlikable is a new one, vaguely supposed to be smart because the author says so, but that's all he has for him, he treat people like shit, even his close help (main female character), highly pedantic, giving you moral lessons despite having none... I mean really, he gives a lesson to "spirits" to be nice on his "chat" or he will ban, then will torture and mu*der without batting an eye the next chapter...

Interesting idea, but a pass for me.
 
  • #2
Troy should have told Anne the truth and plead with her to play along and help him find Aislinn's murderer, instead of letting her go through this hurt without even understanding why
 
  • #3
Excellent work. it's just so captivating, full of suspense , adventure etc. So so excellent write up. I just always want to read over and over again
 
  • #7
Hi, I am Lila Ray, a new author and still crafting my writing skills. So feel free to comment and give me some advice~

Love you guys...
 
  • #11
So loving and crazy and beautiful path they finally were lead down. Great book. thank you! write more...love your style!!
 
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