- #1
So I read a really interesting story before this so that may be causing my bias, but the plot pretty much feels like it’s being made up on the spot and like nothing is connected to anything else. The pacing is also very weird. This grown woman had a kitten die years ago and now she’s crying in the woods looking for it’s body. Then she has healing magic and a wound on the ML show up in the same paragraphs. She then starts circulating her magic when alone, which I don’t think she should even know how to do. My point is that I’ve had dreams with better plotlines than this.