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Uhhh... let's just say.... I am at chapter 4 and the plot feels like it's moving too fast without concrete building of the tension? MC feels like a guy too lovestruck to the point of abandoning rationality in life. (Or is that the default setting?) Like, all of a sudden, no storm, no thunder, go climb into your new crush house after resurrecting from an episode of su*cide, I-I feel hard to connect with the character as I'm thrown right into the eye of the storm of emotions in the very first few introduction of the novel...I think I might need to be in a proper mood before I begin re-reading this....
