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I got tired of reading all these 'I transmigrated into a villainess but I'm a good person' stories so I was glad to see one where the MC actually has some self-awareness. Still, it's kind of dumb to me how she first suspected the ML of being the villain and stopped suspecting him after he fooled her with his 'nice guy' act. He has a dozen red flags but she ignores all of them after being comforted because she's oh-so-scared and tells him honestly about her being from another world and the whole thing being a game, etc, etc. It also doesn't help that she's crushing on him hard so she 'doesn't want to question or suspect him'. 🙄To be honest, she's still a good girl to me, she's just trying to hard her villain secret from the others because she's afraid they'll kill her or something. Charecter-wise, she decently written. ML is kind of the typical devoted and obsessive type, though his charade is kind of interesting, especially when he has to act scared and understanding with the others.The haunted house storyline isn't terribly original but it's okay I guess. It's a bit of a plot hole how the MC has never played the game she helped create just because she 'doesn't like horror games' though. I guess plot-wise, it's too explain the gaps in her knowledge about the game but imagine you helped create like, candy crush, or flappy birds or Genshin impact or some other world-wide popular game, and you have never played it. You barely know what it's about besides some character backstories. Does that make sense? There's some other plot holes regarding how the side characters act too, but they just generally seem too flat to critically judge.
