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No I've changed my mind about this getting a 3.5. This novel is sh*t and the only reason it gets a three is because of the first half. K lets start off. This novel is a slice of life novel (but not really because the protag seems to find trouble all the f*cking time). And you might think: Well thats good. But, no. There is no character development at all. The girls like the MC just 'because' except the loli dragon. And the protag loves using tr*sh talk. And I mean all he ever says is just really gangstery. No, its more gangbangey. Well, I've might've overreacted a bit. Lets backtrack. First half of the story is great, seems like the protag has room for development and the love interests are ok. The plot is fairly good and it all makes sense. Then it goes to shit. And I mean shit. This novel does not deserve anything above a three, it just got that bad. First half: 5/5Alright now lets move on, protag meets new girls, new girls have no personality. Protags personality just seems like he has a personality of a f*cking seashell, because he never really wants to f*ckING MATURE. New girls like protag, protag is having a fit because loli dragon. Loli dragon says its ok, FOR NO f*ckING REASON. Protag goes ahead and brings the new girls into the family. Then a character that was only mentioned in like only 20 chapters, never really developed, never had a strong plot, not a lot of backstory JUST f*ckING MARRIES HIM! Like what? You just married this weird f*cking side character because of a misunderstanding? With her father? So what you gonna f*ck her because her father said so?Ok now lets move on. Here comes the lolis and plot holes! Protag has a lot of lolis, but it felt like a family at first and was kind of cute with its slice of life. Really liked the first half for that part, but he just goes ahead and f*cks them. Or probably f*cks them. Oh yeah did I forget to mention how bad the world building is? Well you might say: You dont need world building in slice of life. But no, the author had to make it a f*ck loli fest and ruined all the other characters to really not have any slice of life gimmick running for it. So he switches to trying to start an adventure, but it honestly never goes anywhere, it's really boring.And you know... I really, really, really have no time to go ahead and fix all this grammar for such a dumb f*cking review. Dont read or youll be disappointed like everyone else. First half: 5/5 Second Half: 0/5.
