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Not a very interesting or new take on this genre. Only thing I do give props for is the MC will go out of his way to kill people.However, the MC has zero attention span, multiple jokes are over-used to the point its cringy, we got 2d villains appearing everywhere and he has NO plans for the future.The worst thing I read, are the villains in this fic. Every time the plot moves forward it is due to evil r*pey humans. For Example:Oh a vampire girl is running from s*avers, oh vampire girl gets captured with zero foreshadowing, oh our MC saves all the r*pe victims, oh a hero brings them into town where bandits proceed to try raping them and oh the prince is some kind of rapist.Pretty much every other man in this fic is either a evil horney racist or some kind of ass kisser who worships our MC. All the girls flock to him like hens in heat and our MC refuses to kill woman no matter what. Where the plot of the story is based solely on our MC reacting to events. Where zero effort is spent in engaging any further with these events or branching off into other world building elements.Overall, the fic is a slice of life, but with out the life aspect in it. Instead we have numerous POV switches in middle of story arcs that interrupt the flow of the story. While at the same time the pacing is abruptly stopped with scene transitions from him building things one moment to him going full mu*der hobo the next instant.The novel had a promising start, but turned to tr*sh since the moment he summoned his first monster.Rate 2.7/5
